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need new |DVD

i need a new copy of Vilonce is Preventable Teen V.I.P Project as my old copy is missing i am Kevin leather jacket and badges sat on a seat Craig Alexander Smith thank you please email back soon
anyone who liked my acting work can find on you tube under teh alias Roxy polecat play kevin again with a babby sitter to cringe at all in the aid of preventing vilonce world wide cool news im now in arabic anyone else

i also have ADHD , Asperger , dilexia i am a member of PHADs Board as wise groups representive i write and act in my script MOTWOAR

Monitering
Outside
The
World
Of
Agravated
Renegades

alternate title varies

Monitering
Outside
The
World
Of
Asperger
Red

this is finded by PHAD and i going across fife schools with me and my actors i also act freelance and have many jobs to do i am an animator a direoctor i have new fantasy books and i record music i have 301 WMA recordings of my own guitar and vocals now i thank 18 and Under for makeing me a actor,.

this is the script going to the schools across fife


MOTWOAR
School Time









Based on the screenplay
“The World Of Aspergered”
Created by
Craig Alexander Smith

Adapted By
Craig Alexander Smith












Projector Opening

INT: Stage Centre (Scene 1)
there is 3 pupils standing in the centre of the stage

Alex : My Names is Alex

Samantha : My Names is Samantha

Craig : My Name is Craig

Samantha : We as friends get but school is hardest part of our life's
can you help see if you can,

Alex : not even I know what friends are at the moment
my names is nobody,

teacher walks on stage

Teacher : as a teacher with learning difficulties I find it hard to teach
rowdy pupils well that's a given,

INT: School Classroom (Scene 2)
The class is sitting down and 2 males walk in one walks up to a pupil in
a blue jumper with a black shirt and no tie

Jamie : Hey freak where's your bag gone

Craig : Their on the floor

Jamie lifts the bag and throws it in an opened cupboard

Jamie : not any more it's not

Craig gets up and walks to the cupboard to retrieve the bag
the class hold the door shut and Jaime is holding the handle
tightly

Craig : Let me out the cupboard now or ill punch you

Jamie : let's see how you can locked in the cupboard



The class laugh

Jamie Swings the door open

Craig Walks out angry and annoyed

INT: School Playground (scene 3)
there is a male standing the playground he is carrying
a cheap looking laptop bag

2 males walk up to him

Jamie : all right dandruff boy hows you today

John : Wash your hair today eh

Craig : Leave me alone please

John : oh look he's crying what have you done to him
he's crying,

Jamie : Cry Baby


INT: School Classroom (scene 4)
The class room is busy the teacher gets up

Teacher : I'm gonna collect something is that all right

The Teacher pushes the chair back and stands up

he leaves the stage by the left side

INT: Punch Bag (Scene 5)
The pupils are In the hallway laughing as a child in a wheelchair is wheeled along
the corridor by a Japanese female

Pupil 1 : All right Spastic hows the legs today no feeling what so ever

Japanese Carer : leave him alone do you understand me

Pupil 2 : what a stupid spastic in a wheelchair


Japanese Carer : I said stop insulting my clients feelings do you understand me
young sir do you understand me

Pupil 3 : what relax don't do it

Japanese Carer : what did you say that is bullying :Concerned: that is bullying

Pupil 1 : welcome to the power dome eh

Japanese Carer : what an insult to my client

the teacher looks at the carer

Teacher : what happened miss Wong

Japanese Carer : My Client was verbally assaulted and bullied by 3 of your pupils
what are you gonna do about it

Teacher :Not Concerned: ill report it at lunchtime in the staff room to Guidance,

Japanese Carer : thank you

INT: The Play Ground Revisited (Scene 6)
a pupil is sitting down and 2 students walk
up to him

Punches his arm

Pupil 4 : all right hows it hanging

Ian : it's cool ye like cool

Pupil 5 : what's up hows it been

Ian : fine nothing im fine who are you

Pupil 4 : were the coolest students In the school
we liked the borat film did you

Ian : hmm not seen it no but it was fun hearing about it
my mum says it hilarious what they get up to in the film



Pupil 5 : like it's amazing ain't it

Ian : ye it's kinda crap to hear about too much like a documentary

Pupil 4 : you've no sense of humour

Ian : I do

Pupil 5 : oh ye like you know what your talking about

Pupil 4 Punches his arm slightly

Ian : please leave me alone

Pupil 5 : what are we annoying you,

Ian : Please leave me alone please leave me alone

Pupil 4 : well that's fine we just love annoying you,

Fade out

INT: changing Rooms (Scene 7)
1 student is standing in her school uniform the other in his
PE Kit

Student 1 : I've forgotten my kit im afraid im gonna have
to wait for the teacher

Student 2 : we'll im off to class anyway

Student 2 leaves the room on stage right and Student 2
is on her own

2 Chavs/Neds walk on stage

Ned 1 : All right hows you forgotten your kit eh what a shame

Ned 2 : oh poor you cant even remember what are you a Mongol

Ned 1: are you a Mongol :go up to face: are you a Mongol

Ned 2 : I :Shout: are you a Mongol

Ned 1 1 punches his arm

Student 1 : leave me alone im Autistic okay im Autistic I don't need this treatment
from you again I don't need this treatment,

Ned 1 : what a shame you look like a mongolised freak with those glassy eyes

Student 1 : why did you say that for I look normal and I look like you and me

Ned 2 : what do you mean you look normal but you look like a Mongol who thinks backwards

Student 1 : I just waiting for the Pe Teacher

Ned 1 : what's Autism eh what's Autism

Student 2 : it's a Neural disorder that affects the brain pasterns and it's also on the
Autistic Spectrum please don't laugh at me I don't mean to look emotionless
please don't laugh at me please don't laugh at me,

Ned 2 : so your a Mongol then your a Mongol then

Student 1 : a Neural Disorder eh what a stupid spazzo

The Pe teacher walks in and looks at the students

PE Teacher : Neural Disorder means students with autism have a harder time
trying to concentrate if you know what I mean.

The students leave

Pe Teacher : what are you doing in the changing room's in your school
uniform you should be in your pe kit like everyone else why are you
still in your School Uniform,

Student 1 : Because I forgot my Pe Kit

Fade to Projector Credits







Executive Producer
Stella McDonald

Co-Produced By
Gillian Page

Produced by
Craig Alexander Smith
Samantha Donaldson
Lucinda Donaldson

Cast

Jamie Blowhard................................Craig Alexander Smith
John Freed....................................................David Brown
Craig Alexander Smith...............................Daniel Malcolm
Japanese Carer........................................Claire Cheu Hong
Pupil Wheelchair...............................................Gavin Yule
Pupil 1............................................Craig Alexander Smith
Pupil 2..........................................................David Brown
Pupil 3.......................................................Daniel Malcolm
Teacher.....................................................Gillian Frail Page
Pupil 4............................................Craig Alexander Smith
Pupil 5...........................................................David Brown
Ian.........................................................Alexander Hughes
Student 1.....................................................Daniel Malcolm
Student 2....................................................David Nicholson
Ned 1...............................................Craig Alexander Smith
Ned 2...............................................................David Brown
1. PE Teacher..................................................Stella McDonald

Set Design
Craig Alexander Smith

Set Design Assistant
Alexander Hughes

Lego Stop Motion Photography
Craig Alexander Smith

Lego Stop Motion Fight Director
Craig Alexander Smith


Lego Stop Motion Set Design
Craig Alexander Smith

Lego Stop Motion Architecture
Craig Alexander Smith

Lego Stop Motion Animator
Craig Alexander Smith

Lego Stop Motion Digital Effects
©Digital Effects Scotland

Lego Stop Motion Slid Transition
Craig Alexander Smith

Costume Designer
Shannon Wright
Lucy Clerk

Digital Effects and Editing
Craig Alexander Smith

Floor Runner
Nayland Balfour

Video Editor
Craig Alexander Smith

Camera Footage
David Brown

Research & Supplemental Material
Craig Alexander Smith
Samantha Donaldson

Essay's and Written Work
Craig Alexander Smith

Original Score by
Craig Alexander Smith




Screenplay (Version 1.1 )
Craig Alexander Smith
Samantha Donaldson (Scene 4)

Screenplay (Version 2.1 131 pages)
Craig Alexander Smith

Screenplay (Version 3.1 10 pages)
Craig Alexander Smith

Based on the idea by
Craig Alexander Smith

Story Boards
Craig Alexander Smith

Press Packs
Craig Alexander Smith

Images Produced By
©Smith Archives

Stage Plans
Craig Alexander Smith

Stage Lighting
Craig Alexander Smith

Stunt Man
Craig Alexander Smith

Police Advisor
Lee Montgomery

Leaflet Information
Kid Scape

Props and Set Pieces
Local Schools

School Uniforms
Wise Group Kirkaldy


Acting Coach
Craig “Wyatt Oh MY God” Smith

Vocal Coach
Craig Alexander Smith

Publicity
PHAD

Publicity Stunts
Craig Alexander Smith

Uniforms by
Wise Group Kirkaldy

Written and Directed by
Craig Alexander Smith

©PHAD

©Wise Group Productions

©Smith Films

©Digital Effects Scotland

the real script is aproxamately 131 not to sure if tehy take teh suicide , abusive fathers and disrespectfull carer storyline although i have had teh creation i made at a live event before i feel it helps to help others.

yours sincerly
Craig Alexander Smith

Re: need new |DVD

Craig Alexander Smith
i need a new copy of Vilonce is Preventable Teen V.I.P Project as my old copy is missing i am Kevin leather jacket and badges sat on a seat Craig Alexander Smith thank you please email back soon
anyone who liked my acting work can find on you tube under teh alias Roxy polecat play kevin again with a babby sitter to cringe at all in the aid of preventing vilonce world wide cool news im now in arabic anyone else

i also have ADHD , Asperger , dilexia i am a member of PHADs Board as wise groups representive i write and act in my script MOTWOAR

Monitering
Outside
The
World
Of
Agravated
Renegades

alternate title varies

Monitering
Outside
The
World
Of
Asperger
Red

this is finded by PHAD and i going across fife schools with me and my actors i also act freelance and have many jobs to do i am an animator a direoctor i have new fantasy books and i record music i have 301 WMA recordings of my own guitar and vocals now i thank 18 and Under for makeing me a actor,.

this is the script going to the schools across fife


MOTWOAR
School Time









Based on the screenplay
“The World Of Aspergered”
Created by
Craig Alexander Smith

Adapted By
Craig Alexander Smith












Projector Opening

INT: Stage Centre (Scene 1)
there is 3 pupils standing in the centre of the stage

Alex : My Names is Alex

Samantha : My Names is Samantha

Craig : My Name is Craig

Samantha : We as friends get but school is hardest part of our life's
can you help see if you can,

Alex : not even I know what friends are at the moment
my names is nobody,

teacher walks on stage

Teacher : as a teacher with learning difficulties I find it hard to teach
rowdy pupils well that's a given,

INT: School Classroom (Scene 2)
The class is sitting down and 2 males walk in one walks up to a pupil in
a blue jumper with a black shirt and no tie

Jamie : Hey freak where's your bag gone

Craig : Their on the floor

Jamie lifts the bag and throws it in an opened cupboard

Jamie : not any more it's not

Craig gets up and walks to the cupboard to retrieve the bag
the class hold the door shut and Jaime is holding the handle
tightly

Craig : Let me out the cupboard now or ill punch you

Jamie : let's see how you can locked in the cupboard



The class laugh

Jamie Swings the door open

Craig Walks out angry and annoyed

INT: School Playground (scene 3)
there is a male standing the playground he is carrying
a cheap looking laptop bag

2 males walk up to him

Jamie : all right dandruff boy hows you today

John : Wash your hair today eh

Craig : Leave me alone please

John : oh look he's crying what have you done to him
he's crying,

Jamie : Cry Baby


INT: School Classroom (scene 4)
The class room is busy the teacher gets up

Teacher : I'm gonna collect something is that all right

The Teacher pushes the chair back and stands up

he leaves the stage by the left side

INT: Punch Bag (Scene 5)
The pupils are In the hallway laughing as a child in a wheelchair is wheeled along
the corridor by a Japanese female

Pupil 1 : All right Spastic hows the legs today no feeling what so ever

Japanese Carer : leave him alone do you understand me

Pupil 2 : what a stupid spastic in a wheelchair


Japanese Carer : I said stop insulting my clients feelings do you understand me
young sir do you understand me

Pupil 3 : what relax don't do it

Japanese Carer : what did you say that is bullying :Concerned: that is bullying

Pupil 1 : welcome to the power dome eh

Japanese Carer : what an insult to my client

the teacher looks at the carer

Teacher : what happened miss Wong

Japanese Carer : My Client was verbally assaulted and bullied by 3 of your pupils
what are you gonna do about it

Teacher :Not Concerned: ill report it at lunchtime in the staff room to Guidance,

Japanese Carer : thank you

INT: The Play Ground Revisited (Scene 6)
a pupil is sitting down and 2 students walk
up to him

Punches his arm

Pupil 4 : all right hows it hanging

Ian : it's cool ye like cool

Pupil 5 : what's up hows it been

Ian : fine nothing im fine who are you

Pupil 4 : were the coolest students In the school
we liked the borat film did you

Ian : hmm not seen it no but it was fun hearing about it
my mum says it hilarious what they get up to in the film



Pupil 5 : like it's amazing ain't it

Ian : ye it's kinda crap to hear about too much like a documentary

Pupil 4 : you've no sense of humour

Ian : I do

Pupil 5 : oh ye like you know what your talking about

Pupil 4 Punches his arm slightly

Ian : please leave me alone

Pupil 5 : what are we annoying you,

Ian : Please leave me alone please leave me alone

Pupil 4 : well that's fine we just love annoying you,

Fade out

INT: changing Rooms (Scene 7)
1 student is standing in her school uniform the other in his
PE Kit

Student 1 : I've forgotten my kit im afraid im gonna have
to wait for the teacher

Student 2 : we'll im off to class anyway

Student 2 leaves the room on stage right and Student 2
is on her own

2 Chavs/Neds walk on stage

Ned 1 : All right hows you forgotten your kit eh what a shame

Ned 2 : oh poor you cant even remember what are you a Mongol

Ned 1: are you a Mongol :go up to face: are you a Mongol

Ned 2 : I :Shout: are you a Mongol

Ned 1 1 punches his arm

Student 1 : leave me alone im Autistic okay im Autistic I don't need this treatment
from you again I don't need this treatment,

Ned 1 : what a shame you look like a mongolised freak with those glassy eyes

Student 1 : why did you say that for I look normal and I look like you and me

Ned 2 : what do you mean you look normal but you look like a Mongol who thinks backwards

Student 1 : I just waiting for the Pe Teacher

Ned 1 : what's Autism eh what's Autism

Student 2 : it's a Neural disorder that affects the brain pasterns and it's also on the
Autistic Spectrum please don't laugh at me I don't mean to look emotionless
please don't laugh at me please don't laugh at me,

Ned 2 : so your a Mongol then your a Mongol then

Student 1 : a Neural Disorder eh what a stupid spazzo

The Pe teacher walks in and looks at the students

PE Teacher : Neural Disorder means students with autism have a harder time
trying to concentrate if you know what I mean.

The students leave

Pe Teacher : what are you doing in the changing room's in your school
uniform you should be in your pe kit like everyone else why are you
still in your School Uniform,

Student 1 : Because I forgot my Pe Kit

Fade to Projector Credits







Executive Producer
Stella McDonald

Co-Produced By
Gillian Page

Produced by
Craig Alexander Smith
Samantha Donaldson
Lucinda Donaldson

Cast

Jamie Blowhard................................Craig Alexander Smith
John Freed....................................................David Brown
Craig Alexander Smith...............................Daniel Malcolm
Japanese Carer........................................Claire Cheu Hong
Pupil Wheelchair...............................................Gavin Yule
Pupil 1............................................Craig Alexander Smith
Pupil 2..........................................................David Brown
Pupil 3.......................................................Daniel Malcolm
Teacher.....................................................Gillian Frail Page
Pupil 4............................................Craig Alexander Smith
Pupil 5...........................................................David Brown
Ian.........................................................Alexander Hughes
Student 1.....................................................Daniel Malcolm
Student 2....................................................David Nicholson
Ned 1...............................................Craig Alexander Smith
Ned 2...............................................................David Brown
1. PE Teacher..................................................Stella McDonald

Set Design
Craig Alexander Smith

Set Design Assistant
Alexander Hughes

Lego Stop Motion Photography
Craig Alexander Smith

Lego Stop Motion Fight Director
Craig Alexander Smith


Lego Stop Motion Set Design
Craig Alexander Smith

Lego Stop Motion Architecture
Craig Alexander Smith

Lego Stop Motion Animator
Craig Alexander Smith

Lego Stop Motion Digital Effects
©Digital Effects Scotland

Lego Stop Motion Slid Transition
Craig Alexander Smith

Costume Designer
Shannon Wright
Lucy Clerk

Digital Effects and Editing
Craig Alexander Smith

Floor Runner
Nayland Balfour

Video Editor
Craig Alexander Smith

Camera Footage
David Brown

Research & Supplemental Material
Craig Alexander Smith
Samantha Donaldson

Essay's and Written Work
Craig Alexander Smith

Original Score by
Craig Alexander Smith




Screenplay (Version 1.1 )
Craig Alexander Smith
Samantha Donaldson (Scene 4)

Screenplay (Version 2.1 131 pages)
Craig Alexander Smith

Screenplay (Version 3.1 10 pages)
Craig Alexander Smith

Based on the idea by
Craig Alexander Smith

Story Boards
Craig Alexander Smith

Press Packs
Craig Alexander Smith

Images Produced By
©Smith Archives

Stage Plans
Craig Alexander Smith

Stage Lighting
Craig Alexander Smith

Stunt Man
Craig Alexander Smith

Police Advisor
Lee Montgomery

Leaflet Information
Kid Scape

Props and Set Pieces
Local Schools

School Uniforms
Wise Group Kirkaldy


Acting Coach
Craig “Wyatt Oh MY God” Smith

Vocal Coach
Craig Alexander Smith

Publicity
PHAD

Publicity Stunts
Craig Alexander Smith

Uniforms by
Wise Group Kirkaldy

Written and Directed by
Craig Alexander Smith

©PHAD

©Wise Group Productions

©Smith Films

©Digital Effects Scotland

the real script is aproxamately 131 not to sure if tehy take teh suicide , abusive fathers and disrespectfull carer storyline although i have had teh creation i made at a live event before i feel it helps to help others.

yours sincerly
Craig Alexander Smith


this is for good publicity if you know what i mean

Re: need new |DVD

Hi Craig,

Thanks so much for sharing this with us, It's really good.

I don't know if you remember me, but we met briefly when filming, i play Maria in the Mark & Maria scene but the scene that you are in is with my partner.
You might not remember, but it's good to hear from you again. How's things? It's really good to see that someone else is wanting to help young people too.

Take care,
Jerri

Re: need new |DVD

not too bad all over you tube with my Vilonce is Prevnetable neurol Dioders package about MSN Bullying it starts with sye from 1 hour photo and transends in a buthcher knife weilding Baby Sitter that is when it turns ugly he talks to gan and the baby sitter arives and does he get his chance its atualy the carer i have made this mistake before and i feel people need to deal with this in a youtube manner my alias is roxypolecat vids should be up now imgaine getting brinan cox in that would be greaT LOL anyohows hows your carrer going

Re: need new |DVD

received the dvd in no time helped me show my coleuge my work and now i have a copy i will preserve it properly.

much apreciation and many thanks

Re: need new |DVD

i don't remmeber typeing that line

Re: need new |DVD

hi it's chris

im fine really i work alot with my actors i have been so busy i really don't have a socail life anymore i mean why should that stop me lol anyhows im fine

Re: need new |DVD

It's Chris

Received the DVD good to see the dvd in Kurdish and Arabic makes me feel like a BBC Actor anyhows thanksfor the assiastance.

Yours Sincerely

Chris Smith

Re: need new |DVD

Hi Chris,

Maybe be a silly question, but have you changed your name?

I'm glad you got your DVD and i know what you mean about feeling like a BBC actor with it translated.

Glad you're fine.

Take care,
Jerri

Re: need new |DVD

call me silly but i forgot the charicter's name in 2007 thats how it actuialy happened even then i still have the Antichrist Superstar T-Shirt with me to this day though starting on new badges all though 3 times it took for the reaction to be shot.