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New Poem

Thought it was time for a more serious one! However my talents are not nearly as up to scratch as all these other posts!

Hold onto your courage
Hold onto your pride
Hold onto your inner strength
Don’t feel the need to hide
Find a way to carry on
And battle through the pain
Remember you are not alone
For others feel the same
Reach a point where you decide
Where you can call the shots
A point where you are in control
A point where they are not
Don’t forget that you survived
You made it through in spite
Of everyone against you, still
You found a way to fight
So when your world clouds over
And it’s dark right through the day
When no-one’s there to listen
And you feel you’ve lost your way
Take the time to realise
Just how far you’ve come
The strength you need, it lives in you
And there’s no need to run

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hey thats surely one for the book! i like it matey

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Ta very much k dog x

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need i say it? well done ayeee

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ayeee! nae tather aba x

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awww Katy your such a great writer babe, that poems is amazing hun xxx

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Thank u but i think we need to get some more poems on cos mines are no where near as good as everyone elses! x

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yeah they are much better than mine anyway! so your doing good hehe(LL)xx

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well for you katy, i'll post one of my poems at some point, then i'll always be the worst lol so you wont feel like everyone's is better than yours, (not that they are at all, think everyones is great) x

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iv said it before il say it again, I. AM. THE. BEST! lol but this is close to my level

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i like this poem a lot. i especially like the bits that sound like the things i say to people all the time. things like taking control and realising how far you have come.
i also think that the writer should accept the fact that the poem is good and the writer can indeed write very well.
well done!