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Is this title ok? "Be Who You Want To Be"

Although rules for a headline are less stringent than those in professional or academic writing, I am unsure of ending this title with the word, "be". Is it okay to use this as a title of an email advertising message? "Be Who You Want To Be"
Thanks in advance...

Re: Is this title ok? "Be Who You Want To Be"

Yes, it's fine.

Impact overrides all rules. That aside, I see nothing wrong with ending it 'be'.