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Re: Grammar Question

Claire
"I saw the Count in my room. He was making my bed. Then, later, I saw him laying the table."

I saw the Count in my room, making my bed. Then, later, I saw him laying the table.

In your sentences, YOU know (from all the Counts in all the aristocratic families in the world), the SPECIFIC Count you are referring to. I DON"T. The reader does not. Nothing in your sentence tells me WHICH COUNT YOU ARE REFERRING TO.
All that we have are two actions he performed - 'was making' and 'was laying'. Any Count in the whole wide world could do that. These actions don't tell me specifically WHICH COUNT. There is no Restrictive clause in your sentences above.

Is this the Count THAT you met at that cocktail party you attended last week?
Is this the Count THAT invited you to his chateau?

"For those children WHO ARE not going on the school outing,…"

There is a class of school children. Some are going on a school outing, some are not.

The children I AM REFERRING TO / TALKING ABOUT are:
"For those children WHO ARE NOT GOING on the school outing,…"


Thanks for your explanation. However the sentences I have refered to are from the book "Drakula" by written Bram Stoker where the subject is "Count Drakula"
Thank so much again. From this post I have learned something new.

Re: Grammar Question

I need help.
Q:Pick out appositive modifiers from given sentences.
1. On the way he met his hot tempered friend who was a famous player.
2. His father is an expert of heart transplants who was awarded a prize from local government.
3. A colorful painting, it was made by Zaid in 2010.
4. Sara, a cute little girl, is also very smart.
5. Cricket, a game somewhat similar to baseball, is popular in Pakistan and India.

Re: Grammar Question

It's my pleasure