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commas and "that"

Hi,

Check out this sentence please:

"The boy stated that, while he loved football, he didn't play it every day."

Is it correct to have commas after "that" and after "football"?

What are the rules around this?

Thanks,

Brendan

Re: commas and "that"

"The boy stated that, while he loved football, he didn't play it every day."

"while he loved football" is a clause inserted into another clause ("that he didn't play it every day"). We keep the two ideas separate by marking the interposed clause off with commas.

compare:

"The boy stated that he loved football, but he wouldn't expect his son to play it."

Here, the 'but' clause is an independent clause (subject + verb + it makes sense by itself and therefore expresses a complete thought), and is marked off with a comma preceding it.

compare:

"The boy stated that he loved football but didn't play it every day."

The 'but' clause does not have a subject, so is not an independent clause.

Re: commas and "that"

Thanks Claire,

I'm glad to hear that!