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Re: about this sentence

Thank you, Paul!

Does the part "The more information about the plan..." look "heavy" in the front of the first clause, so "The more information you gather about the plan" look better?

Thank you!

Re: about this sentence

(1) The more information you gather about the plan, the easier it will be for you to make a decision.

(2) The more information about the plan you gather, the easier it will be for you to make a decision.




There's really do difference, but I slightly prefer (1).



PaulM