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Re: Comma

Since "and meets a guy named Frank" is not independent (no subject):

In 1933, David spends most of his time working at the office and meets a guy named Frank, whom he writes a book about.

Your writing (tenses) in the Historical Present. OK - but "in the year 1933" is too historical-sounding.