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Apr 4, 2008 - 5:06PM

sentence construction

Is it correct to say:

We open to you a world of communication possibilities with the latest...

Souldn't that be:

We open a world of communication possibilities to you with the latest...

Thank you.

Apr 5, 2008 - 3:20PM

Re: sentence construction

Mmm, I prefer the second version with 'for you' substituted for 'to you'.

Anna

Apr 10, 2008 - 3:56PM

Re: Re: sentence construction

Thank you.